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翻译:《特洛伊》完整情节叙述(慎入)

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发表于 2004-3-27 17:54:45 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
遵从浊酒大人的指点,我也在这里贴了一份。


警告:情节完全泄露,请考虑清楚再往下看。

我也犹豫了很久,怕贴出来影响将来看电影的新鲜感,但已经翻译了,还是贴出来吧。

我尽我所能翻译的,但水平有限,众位大人可与下面英文对照观看。

人名中英文对照(方便与神话对照):

阿喀琉斯——Achilles
赫克托尔——Hector
帕里斯——Paris
海伦——Helen
阿伽门农——Agamennon
奥德修斯——Odysseus——(Sean Bean饰演)
阿波罗——Apollo——太阳神
Menelaus——斯巴达王(墨涅拉俄斯)——海伦原来的丈夫
Priam——特洛伊王(普里阿摩斯)——帕里斯和赫克托尔的父亲
Briseis——帕里塞伊斯——帕里斯和赫克托尔的表妹(堂妹)
Pactriclus——帕特洛克罗斯——阿喀琉斯的表弟(堂弟)
Thetis——忒提斯——阿喀琉斯的母亲——(Julie Christie饰演)
Andromache——安德洛玛刻——赫克托尔的妻子——(Saffron Burrows饰演)
Ajax——埃阿斯——希腊英雄

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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-27 17:55:25 | 只看该作者
《特洛伊》完整情节叙述

    《特洛伊》以阿伽门农王与另一位希腊国王的军队在峡谷中的两军对战作为开始。两方最优秀的一名战士被选出来进行战斗。另一位国王的军队中的一个人被选出,他从队伍中走出,所有的人一起欢呼。阿伽门农挑选了阿喀琉斯,但他不在那儿,一个男孩被派去请他。阿喀琉斯正和两个女人在他的帐篷里,他们都是赤裸的(第一次瞥见Brad Pitt的裸体)。阿喀琉斯说他将在早上和阿伽门农谈话,但这时已经是早上了。他飞驰到战场战斗,并且在战斗中握剑纵身一跃,刺中了另一个战士的脖子,赢得了战斗(用他在预告片中那个跳跃的动作)。他又向其他人挑战,但没人赶应战。

    另一个场景是关于斯巴达王、赫克托尔王子、帕里斯王子和海伦的。他们在斯巴达一起围坐在一张桌子旁,谈论斯巴达和特洛伊之间的和平问题。帕里斯充满爱意地看着海伦,赫克托尔发觉了。海伦离开回到她的房间,帕里斯跟在她的后面。海伦正坐在她的房间中,把她的头发放下,帕里斯走了进来,关上门,并且把门锁上了。海伦对帕里斯说她这一周犯了很多错误。帕里斯问她关于昨晚和之前几个夜晚的事,接着问她是不是要他离开。海伦以脱掉她的衣服的行动作为回答(像预告片中看到的那样)。下一个场景,帕里斯站在床边,送给海伦一条项链(当她移动时,他右边的乳房露了出来),并要她和他慧特洛伊。
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-27 17:55:59 | 只看该作者
下一个场景是关于赫克托尔和帕里斯的,他们站在一艘回特洛伊的船上。帕里斯问赫克托尔是否爱他,赫克托尔回答说他当然爱他,因为帕里斯是他的弟弟。他们回忆起过去的美好时光,之后帕里斯对赫克托尔说他必须让他看一个东西。他们走下甲板进入船舱,然后看到了海伦。赫克托尔对帕里斯的行为十分生气(像预告片中看到的那样),并且告诉他这件事的严重后果。他希望调转船头回斯巴达,但是帕里斯坚决不让。之后,Menelaus发现海伦不见了,一个乡下人告诉他海伦去哪儿了。帕里斯、赫克托尔和海伦骑马进入特洛伊称,人们欢呼着将玫瑰花瓣撒向他们(像预告片中看到的那样)。之后他们晋见了特洛伊王,赫克托尔告诉他帕里斯作了什么。他们都知道帕里斯爱过很多女人,但是这个女人不一样。所有人都来问候他们,然后,观众看见了赫克托尔和帕里斯的表妹Briseis。

    下一个场景是关于阿喀琉斯和他的表弟Pactriclus的。他们在一起连件(因为阿喀琉斯是最好的战士)。这时,奥德修斯骑马来到,告诉阿喀琉斯阿伽门农要海伦做的事。阿喀琉斯不喜欢阿伽门农,也不想参与这场战争。但是,他的母亲Theis使他相信,他应该在战争中战斗,尽管他知道他将会在战争中死去,他永远无法再见到他了。
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-27 17:56:37 | 只看该作者
接下来,观众将看到1000只船,每条船上都有五十名士兵。阿喀琉斯在一艘挂有黑帆的船上。阿伽门农说他控制不了阿喀琉斯(这是正确的)。赫克托尔见到了他的妻子Andromache和孩子。帕里斯和海伦在他的屋子里,当海伦说他们是为她而来的,帕里斯穿着长袍从背景中穿过,展示了他健美的胸肌。特洛伊接到警报说斯巴达人已经来了,接下来那一天,阿喀琉斯的船率先登陆。当其他船只努力赶上的时候,他手下的人都冲了出来,屠杀特洛伊人。赫克托尔和其他人飞驰而出去救援特洛伊人。阿喀琉斯和他的人马到达了阿波罗神庙,一个人说阿波罗厌恶战争,所以阿喀琉斯砍掉了一座阿波罗雕像的脑袋,并且说他不会看见以后发生的事了。赫克托尔的人马也到达了神庙,阿喀琉斯的人全撤到了神庙里面,等他们进入时伏击他们。赫克托尔想与阿喀琉斯战斗,但阿喀琉斯让他回家去找他的妻子。那一天的战斗结束了,阿喀琉斯赫在他的屋里发现了一个奖励品,一个人说他认为她(Briseis)将是战斗后很好的消遣。Briseis被绑在一根柱子上,阿喀琉斯问她她的姓名,但她没有回答。于是,他继续脱下他的盔甲,而且明显的他们的盔甲下是赤裸的,以为他们展示了Brad要不以上的裸体。

    之后,阿喀琉斯被叫去见阿伽门农。他们激烈地争吵,阿喀琉斯说阿伽门农是“asack of wine"(如果是在现在,这相当于一句脏话)。但无论如何,奥德修斯还是使他冷静下来并且让他回到了自己的帐篷中。
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-27 17:57:09 | 只看该作者
同一天晚上,海伦想逃回到Menelaus身边,但是赫克托尔找到了她,并且告诉她帕里斯今晚需要她。第二天发生了最大的一次战斗,赫克托尔、帕里斯在一个宏伟的大厅中与Priam王谈话并听从他的告诫。他们试着想出一个赢得这场战争的方法,但是帕里斯坚持认为不会有战争发生,他说他将与Menelaus决斗,谁赢了谁将得到海伦。战斗开始了,成千上万的特洛伊人聚集在特洛伊城的入口处,排成队列,赫克托尔和帕里斯骑马到了军队的最前面(像预告片中看到的那样)。阿伽门农和Menelaus的军队出现了,并像通常的战斗前那样与他们相隔一段距离摆好了阵势。帕里斯、赫克托尔、阿伽门农一起来到了战场中心。赫克托尔说:特洛伊的人民永远不会屈服于外来的统治者。”阿伽门农则回答说:“那么,特洛伊人都得死。”之后,帕里斯提出与Menelaus进行决斗,他同意了。于是,赫克托尔和阿伽门农把他们留在了战场的中心。赫克托尔告诉帕里斯,让他诱使Menelaus快速移动、大力挥剑,因为他很快就会疲惫不堪。

    帕里斯和Menelaus开始战斗,而他唯一能做的就是用盾牌抵挡。Menelaus集中了帕里斯下颌几次,帕里斯也击中了他的背部,但却丢掉了自己的盾牌。他抵挡闪避了几次,终于丢掉了他的剑,同时Menelaus砍中了他的左腿,他跌倒在地上。Menelaus将剑抵在他的脖子上并且来回移动着,但是帕里斯拼命移动,爬向赫克托尔,他坐在赫克托尔脚边上望着特洛伊的军队。然后,赫克托尔说战斗已经结束了,但是Menelaus希望帕里斯继续战斗。帕里斯说:“不!”(眼中显出极大的恐惧)Menelaus想杀了帕里斯,但是赫克托尔刺中了Menelaus的腹部杀了他。Menelaus的死引发了这一天的战斗。

    所有的人都在战斗,赫克托尔与Ajax战斗并且杀了他。斯巴大士兵被大量屠杀,于是他们撤退了。这一天的战斗结束了,所有人都回归本队度过晚上的时光。阿喀琉斯告诉他的士兵收拾行李,因为他们第二天早上就要回家了。同时,阿喀琉斯问阿伽门农Briseis在哪,阿伽门农说:“我没有碰她,我只是把它送给了一个人。”在Briseis就要被人侮辱时,阿喀琉斯及时赶到救了她。那一夜,Briseis将一把刀架在了阿喀琉斯的喉咙上,阿喀琉斯让他杀了她,但是当然她没有那么做,and the dirty thing happens.(如果你问我,我会说那一幕枕地很性感)

    之后,特洛伊人出现在山顶上,带火的箭落在了斯巴达人的帐篷边,巨大的球星物从山上滚下,被火箭的火点燃,它们摧毁了很多帐篷。
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-27 17:57:48 | 只看该作者
第二天早晨,另一场战斗开始了。Patriclus穿上了阿喀琉斯的盔甲出现在战场上战斗,但是阿喀琉斯和他的人不知道这件事。Patriclus像阿喀琉斯那样战斗,他冲向了赫克托尔,赫克托尔与他战斗并且杀了她。所有人,包括赫克托尔都认为那就是阿喀琉斯。阿喀琉斯手下的一个人告诉了他这个坏消息,他非常愤怒。Briseis请求阿喀琉斯不要与赫克托尔作战,因为他是她的表兄,但是阿喀琉斯不听。他骑马来到特洛伊城门外,叫赫克托尔的名字大约六次。所有的人都站在一座高耸的他楼上(这是帕里斯受伤后第一次出现),因此可以看到一切。赫克托尔最终走下了塔楼,与阿喀琉斯战斗。他们激烈的战斗......阿喀琉斯用一根标枪刺中了赫克托尔的肩膀,之后又用他的剑刺中了赫克托尔的腹部。赫克托尔的妻子看见这一幕痛哭失声,他们展现了帕里斯的表情(显出难以置信的神情)。之后,阿喀琉斯将赫克托尔的尸体拖回了他的帐篷。那一夜,特洛伊王偷偷潜入阿喀琉斯的帐篷,请求他把赫克托尔的尸体还给他,好为他举行了一个体面的葬礼。阿喀琉斯同意了,并且承诺特洛伊将得到十二天的和平。在把赫克托尔的尸体交换前,他对着尸体流下了眼泪。Briseis也回到了特洛伊。

    之后的一天,斯巴达建造了特洛伊木马(奥德修斯的主意),并且把它留给特洛伊人。帕里斯和特洛伊王出城观看木马,帕里斯让人烧了它,但是其他人说:“这是神的礼物。”(是的,应该听帕里斯德)他们将木马拖回特洛伊城,所有的人都在庆祝。这时,观众将看到帕里斯将箭射向靶心的镜头。夜幕降临,斯巴达人从木马中出来,并开城让其他斯巴达士兵进城。阿喀琉斯跑开去找Briseis。所有的要塞都失守了,更多的杀戮在进行着。Briseis在找帕里斯,因为她知道只有帕里斯知道逃出城的路。帕里斯也在找Briseis,与此同时,他射出了一些箭(仍旧百发百中)。特洛伊王被阿伽门农杀了。Briseis正在一座雕像前祈祷,阿伽门农突然出现抓住了她。但是他不知道她在手中握有一把匕首,并且用它刺中了阿伽门农的脖子(所有人都鼓起掌来)。阿喀琉斯找到了Briseis,他们开始交谈。帕里斯突然出现,用箭射中了阿喀琉斯的脚后跟(射箭的声音比《魔戒》中大多了)。阿喀琉斯没有马上死去,因此,帕里斯又向他的胸口射了四箭。Briseis与阿喀琉斯谈话,最后,阿喀琉斯终于还是死了。帕里斯和Briseis逃走了。之后,有人发现阿喀琉斯死了。他们为她举行了盛大的葬礼。电影结束于奥德修斯说,他将来人们能记得,他生活在特洛伊战争的时代,但更重要的,是生活在阿喀琉斯的时代。

    全剧终
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-27 17:58:17 | 只看该作者
Troy opens with the armies of Agamemnon and another King in Greece standing off in a ravine. The best man of each army is called for. The man for the other King is called and he walks out while everyone cheers. Agmemenon calls for Achilles, but Achilles is not there. A boy is sent to find Achilles. Achilles is in his tent with two women and they are all naked (first glimpse of Brad Pitt naked)  . Achilles says he will talk to Agamemnon in the morning, but it is the morning. Achilles rides to the battle and with one swing of his sword, he stabs the other fighter in the neck and wins (uses his jumping move seen in the trailers). Calls for others, but no one challenges him.

The next scene is with Menelaus, Prince Hector, Prince Paris, and Helen. Everyone is sitting around a table in Sparta and they are talking about peace between Sparta and Troy. Paris looks at Helen (lovingly) and Hector notices. Helen leaves to go to her room and Paris follows her. Helen is sitting in her room taking down her hair when Paris walks in, shuts the door, and locks it  . Helen tells Paris that she has made many mistakes this week and Paris asks her about last night, and the night before and the night before. Paris then asks Helen if she wants him to go and she responds by taking off her dress (as seen in the trailers). Next, Paris is standing by the bed (not showing his whatsits)  and gives Helen a necklace (when she moves, her right breast is shown). Paris asks her to go to Troy with him.

To be continued (if anyone would like me to)...

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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-27 17:58:37 | 只看该作者
MAJOR SPOILER ALERT!

The next scene is with Hector and Paris. THey are on their boat sailing back to Troy. Paris asks Hector if he loves him and Hector says that he does because Paris is his little brother. They rememeber the good ol' days and then Paris tells Hector that he needs to show him something. They go down into the hold of the boat and they see Helen. Hector gets very angry with Paris (as seen in the trailers) and tells him the consequences of what he has done. Hector wants to turn the boat around, but Paris says no. Next, Menelaus finds out that Helen is missing and a peasant tells him where she is. Paris, Hector, and Helen then ride into Troy and the people are cheering and throwing rose petals (as seen in the trailers). They meet King Priam and Hector talks to Priam about what Paris has done. They both know that Paris has loved many women  , but this one is different. Everyone greets them and the audience meets Briseis, the cousin of Hector and Paris.

The next scene is with Achilles and his cousin Pactriclus. They are practicing sward fighting (since Achilles is the best). Odysseus (played by Sean Bean) then rides up and tells Achilles what Agamemnon wants to do about Helen. Achilles doesn't like Agamemnon and doesn't want anything to do with the war. Achilles is then seen with his mother, Thetis (played by Julie Christie), and she convinces Achilles that he needs to fight in the war and that she knows that she will never see him again because he will die.  

To be continued...
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-27 17:59:01 | 只看该作者
MAJOR SPOILER ALERT!

Where was I! Oh, yes...

The next thing the audience sees are the 1,000 ships with 50 in each  . Achilles is in a ship with a balck sail and Agamemnon says that he can't control Achilles (which is true). Hector sees his wife, Andromache (played by Saffron Burrows), and his son. Paris is in his room with Helen and Helen says that they are coming for her and Paris walks through the background with a robe on showing his nice buff chest  hehe. Troy is alerted that the Spartans are coming and the next day Achilles' ship lands on the beach first. All of his men get out and kill many Trojans while the other ships are tying to catch up. Hector and others ride out to aid the Trojans and Achilles and his men get to the temple of Apollo. A man says that Apollo is disgusted by the war so Achilles cuts off the head of a statue of Apollo saying that he can't see whats going on any more. Hector and his men get to the temple, all of Achilles men go inside and ambush Hector's men when they get in. Hector wants to fight Achilles but Achilles tells Hector to go home to his wife. The battle is over for the day and Achilles finds a prize in his room. A man says that he thought she (Briseis) would be of amusement  . Briseis is tied to a pole and Achilles asks her her name, but she doesn't respond. Achilles then proceeds to take off his armor and apparently they are naked under their armor because they show Brad from the waist up  .

Achilles is then told to go see Agamemnon. They have an arguement and Achilles calls Agamemnon a "sack of wine" (if this was modern times, there would be a four letter word there) hehe. Anyway, Odysseus calms Achilles and Achilles goes back to his tent.

To be continued...

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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-27 17:59:21 | 只看该作者
MAJOR SPOILER ALERT!

...That same night Helen tries to escape and go back to Menelaus, but Hector finds her and tells her that Paris needs her tonight  .The next day is one of the biggest battles. Hector and Paris are in a great hall with King Priam and his counsel. They are trying to think of ways to win the war, when Paris says that there wont be a war. Paris says that he will challenge Menelaus to a fight and who ever wins, will get Helen  . The war begins to start and there are thousnads of Trojans lined up by the entrance of Troy. Hector and Paris ride to the front (as seen in the trailers). The army of Agamemnon and Menelaus appear and they have a stand off like most wars back then did. Paris, Hectos, Agmemenon, and Menelaus rife to the middle and talk. Hector says that "No son of Troy will ever bow to foreign ruler." (as shown in the trailers) and Agmemenon responds with "Then every son of Troy shall die." (also seen in the trailers). Paris then challenges Menelaus to a fight and Menelaus accepts and Hector and Agamemnon leave Paris and Menelaus in the middle. Hector gives Paris some advice of letting Menelaus swing because he will tire out. Paris agrees and looks very scard and nervous (uses his eyes in this scene)  .

Paris and Menelaus start fighting and all Paris can do is block. Menelaus hits Paris in the jaw a few times, Paris hits him back but loses his sheild. Paris swings a few times and loses his sword and Menelaus cuts Paris' left leg  and Paris falls to his knees. Menelaus puts his sword to his neck and swings, but Paris moves and crawls back to Hector. Paris sits and Hectors feet looking toward the Trojan army and Hector says that the fight is over, but Menelaus wants Paris to keep fighting. Paris says no (with great fear in his eyes) and Menelaus tries to hit Paris, but Hector stabs Menelaus in the stomach and kills him (there are new pics of this that EL posted). The killing of Menelaus starts the battle for the day.

Everyone fights  and Hector fights Ajax and kills him. The Sartans are beign slaughtered and they retreat. The battle ends for the day and everyone goes home for the night. Achilles tells his men to pack up because they are going home in the morning. At this point Achilles asks Agamemnon where Briseis is and Agamemnon says "I haven't touched her. I gave her to the men." Briseis is about to be branded when Achilles comes and saves her. That night Briseis puts a knife to Achilles throat and Achilles tells her to kill him, but of course she doesn't and the dirty thing happens (which is pretty sexy if you ask me).

After that the Trojans are seen on the top of a hill and fire arrows are lands near the Startans camp. Huge balls of stuff are roled down the hill and catch on fire from the arrows. They destroy many tents.

To be continued...
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-27 17:59:40 | 只看该作者
MAJOR SPOILER ALERT!

... The next morning, another battle starts and Patriclus takes Achilles armor and goes out and fights in the battle. Achilles and his men do not know this. Patriclus fights like Achilles and he runs into Hector. Hector fights him and Patriclus dies  . Hector thought it was Achilles, as did everyone else. One of Achilles' men tells Achilles the bad news and Achilles gets very angry. Briseis tells Achilles not to fight Hector because Hector is her cousin, but Achilles doesn't listen. Achilles rides to the gate of Troy and calls Hectors' name like 6 times. Everyone is on one of the towers (this is the next time we see Paris after he is hijured) and they can see everything. Hector finally goes down and begins to fight Achilles. Achilles and Hector fight...Achilles stabs Hector in the shoulder with a spear and then in the stomach with his sword. Hector's wife sees this and cries, they show Paris (has a look of disbelief) and then Achilles drags Hector's body back to his camp. That night King Priam sneeks into Achilles tent and asks for Hector's body back for a proper funeral. Achilles agrees and says that the Trojans will have 12 days of peace and then he cries over Hector's body before he gives him up. Briseis also goes back to Troy.

The next day the Spartans build the Trojan Horse (Odysseus' idea) and leave it for the Trojans. Paris and King Priam go out to the horse and Paris tells them to burn it, but they say that "it is a gift from the Gods" (yeah right, listen to Paris). They take the Horse back to Troy and everyone celebrates. Paris is then seen shooting arrows at a target  . The night comes and the Spartans get out of the Horse and let all the others into the city. Achilles runs off to find Briseis. All heck breaks loose and more killing is done. Briseis is looking for Paris because she knows that he knows where they need to go to escape. Paris looks for Briseis and in doing so he fires a few arrows (still doesn't miss) and King Priam is killed by Agamemnon  . Briseis is then found at a statue praying when Agamemnon grabs her. He doesn't know that she has a dagger in her hand and she stabs him in the neck (everyone clapped). Achilles finds Briseis and they talk. Paris then shows up and shoots Achilles in the heel with an arrow (the arrows sound sooo much more powerful than in LOTR). Achilles doen't die right away, so Paris shoots 4 more arrows into his chest. Briseis talks with Achilles (too long is you ask me) and Achilles finally dies. Paris and Briseis escape and the men find Achilles dead. They have a funeral for Achilles and the film ends with Odysseus sauing that he wants to be remembered as being alive in the time of the Trojan war, but most of all, the time of Achilles.

THE END
12#
发表于 2004-3-27 19:18:39 | 只看该作者
楼主真的很会灌水也~一段一帖
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-27 20:47:23 | 只看该作者
我倒没想到这个方面的问题,这么贴有几点原因:一是原文这样分段,对照看比较方便;二是我15kb没有概念,怕超过;三是方便修改,如果我发现那段需要改,比较方便。
希望我没给大家造成不便。
也希望我的帖子不仅仅是为了灌水,如果那样我大可不必费力翻译,直接发些口水就行了。
14#
发表于 2004-3-27 21:00:42 | 只看该作者
MM又不是故意的~
一般乐趣园的论坛是有每貼15 K的限制,而像这里这种格式的论坛,也有这种规定吗,汗~~~还真没研究过这种格式的
其实分貼发有分貼的好处,看得更明白


还有,劝一句,对别人提意见时,不要在没搞清楚原因前就妄下论断.
网络是自由的,尊重别人的同时也是尊重自己

笑,俺这话可能对这里好多仍是未成年人的小朋友来说言重了,如有得罪,让哪位小心灵受伤,先说声"对不起"了


















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15#
发表于 2004-3-27 21:01:35 | 只看该作者
Paris竟然没死??离原著差太多了。
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